I have an essay to revise – Essay 3. I got 123 out of 150. I have uploaded
2. Essay 3, and
3. 1302. Review of Essay 2 before you integrate info for Essay 3_2
Some feedback I got back from my instructor to fix:
· Use original title, not the name of assignment or reading.
· Use the author’s full name for the first time the name is mentioned. After that, refer to author by last name only.
· ineffective word choice
· …who [is] constantly trying…
· Research, whether it involves the story, historical references, biographical information should be cited in the body of the text and a citation entry should appear in Works Cited.